Watch a good movie sometime without reference to whats happening but only with attention to how it was photographed; youll see the change of focuszoom in, pan out, close-up on face, fade to black, open from aboveeasily. You want to do that in what you write; its one of the things that keep peoples eyes on the page, though theyre almost never conscious of it.
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About Diana Gabaldon, "I Give You My Body . . .": How I Write Sex Scenes
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